
Grad Student:
1. flashbacks. I almost always skip them.
3. Derogatory language. I understand that you are trying to make a point about your character being tough, having an edge, being a jerk, but you are a writer. use your imagination and show me this character without dropping f bombs, making homosexual remarks, or generally being an ass.
4. Adultery- just not me thing, I have mentioned this before and books about cheaters and adultery is a turn off.
5. Too much world building, not enough action. George R.R. Martin BARELY gets by in my opinion with his epic descriptions of food and clothing. Everyone else, please stop and just let my imagination go for it.
6. Characters who write bad poetry that I have to read that makes them feel deep or express their emotions. This is usual terrible poetry and there is not much worse to read in this world.






Robert Jordan's Wheel of Time series is a CLASSIC example of uber world-building.
But on a cheerier note, the new editions of these books have much improved covers.
Good work, professional cover-pickers.
Let's start a club of flashback haters. I cannot stand them!
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